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My new friend, Elena
I would like to introduce my new friend whose name is Elena. I met Elena this semester in school. It was wonderful when I met her because of her friendlyness and kindness.
Elena is 20 years old and she comes from Kaohsiung. She has a sister and a brother. Now she lives in the tenement with me. Playing the piano, listening to radio, and watching TV are her favorites. She also likes dancing and singing in her pastime. Elena is quite easygoing and considerate. She doesn't get angry easily. Also, she is really smart and a good helper in her family. English, Spanish, and Geography are her favorite subjects. After college, she wants to get higher degree such as master program. She really hopes to be an English teacher in the future. One of Elena's favorite places is the beach. She takes a rest and relaxes at beach when she feels anxious and uneasy.
In addition, she has heard that Japan has many fashionable shopping stores. So she is eager to take a visit to Japan. The other country that she loves is New Zealand, which is quiet and slow.
I enjoy the time when we are together. The things I learned from Elena are possitive such as the attitude to learning. She concentrates in the class and always finishes assignments on time. I love the feeling and atmosphere when we are together.

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I would like to introduce my new friend whose name is Elena. I met Elena this semester in school. It was wonderful when I met her because of her friendness and kindness.
Elena is 20 years old and she comes from Kaohsiung. She lives with her parents and siblings. Now she lives in the dormitory with me. Playing the piano, listening to radio, and watching TV are her favorites. She also likes dancing and singing in her pastime. Elena is quite easygoing and considerate. She doesn't get angry easily. Also, she is really considerate and smart. English, Spanish, and Geography are her favorite subjects. After college, she wants to get higher degree such as master program. She really hopes to be an English teacher in the future. One of Elena's favorite places is beach. She takes a rest and relaxes at beach when she feels anxious and uneasy. In addition, she has heard that Japan has many fashionable shopping stores. So she is eager to take a visit to Japan. Otherwise, she will go to New Zealand. There are lots of sheep and cows, and it is quiet to live there when she is old.
I enjoy the time when we are together. The things I learned from Elena are different, for instance, the attitude of learning. She is concentrate in the class and always finishes assignments on time. I love the feeling and the atmosphere when we are together.

Combine each group of short, chopy sentences into one sentence

1. Chihuahua is divided into two regions. It is the largest Mexican state. One region is a mountainous area in the west. The other region is a desert basin in the north and east.
Chihuahua is divided into two regions in the largest Mexican state, one is a mountainous area in the west and the other is a desert basin in the north and east.

2. Disney World covers a large area of land. It is an amusement park. It is located in Orlando, Florida. The land includes lakes, golf courses, campsites, hotels, and a wildlife preserve.
The amusement park Disney World covers a large area of land, which is located in Orlando, Florida, and it includes lakes, golf courses, campsites, hotels, and a wildlife preserve.
3. Jamaica is one of the world’s leading producers of bauxite. It is the third largest island in the Caribbean Sea. Bauxite is an ore. Aluminum is made from this ore.
The third largest island in the Caribbean Sea, Jamaica, is one of the world’s leading producers of bauxite what is made for aluminum.
4. Robert Ballard made headings in 1985. He is an oceanographer. In 1985 he discovered the remains of the Titanic. The Titanic was the “unsinkable” passenger ship. It has rested on the floor of the Atlantic Ocean since 1912. It struck an iceberg in 1912.
An oceanographer whose name is Robert Ballard made headings in 1985, he discovered the “unsinkable” Titanic, which struck an iceberg in 1912 and has rest n the floor of the Atlantic Ocean since then.
5. William Shakespeare’s father was a glove maker and a town official. William Shakespeare’s father was John Shakespeare. He owned a shop in Stratford-upon-Avon. Strafford-upon-Avon is a town. It is about 75 miles northwest of London.
William Shakespeare’s father, John Shakespeare was a glove maker and a town official, who owned a shop in the town-Stratford about 75 miles northwest of London.
6. The Republic of Yemen is an ancient land. It is located at the southwestern tip of the Arabian Peninsula. This land has been host to many prosperous civilizations. These civilizations include the Kingdom of Sheba and various Islamic empires.
The Republic of Yemen is an ancient land, which is located at the southwestern tip of the Arabian Peninsula, and has been host to many prosperous civilizations such as the kingdom of Sheba and various Islamic empires.

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1.Main Ideas
Who? Elena Where? in Nai-tai When? This semester

2.Body
Background - from Kaohsiung, Taiwan. Lives with parents and siblings.
Personal information such as favorites, opinions, goals, personalities
Enjoys English, Spanish, Geography
Wants to go to master program and then to be an English teacher
Loves to watch TV and listening to radio
Favorite place to go: beach
Favorite country: New Zealand and Japan
Her belief- to obtain money and responsibility to the family
My reaction to Elena: She is a considerate, easygoing, and smart girl.
I enjoyed learning about her belief.
We have something in common: the dressing style and the personalities
3.Conclusion
I learned a lot of different thing, for instance, the attitude of learning.
I love the feeling and the atmosphere when we are together.

How to make sea wood egg soup

Sea wood egg soup is a common soup. It’s quite easy to cook if you follow these steps.
First, boil 2 cups of chicken broth.And add salt to taste. Stir in 1-teaspoon water to a beaten egg and gradually pour it over the boiling bubbles in the broth.
Third, throw in some chopped green onions and dried seaweed (both Wakame or Nori will do.) After that, shut the heat and wait till the seaweeds become soft.
Finally, the sea wood egg soup is finished.

How glass bottles are made

Glass is made from sand, limestone, and soda ash. First, these three materials are mixed together in the right proportions. Sometimes broken glass is added. Second, this mixture was heated strongly in a furnace. After that, glass is produced. Then, It is shaped into bottles in the mould. Also, the bottles are reheated to strengthen the glass. Finally, they are ready to be used.